Endorsements

Comments From Students:

Hi Debbie,

I got into Columbia!!! Can you believe it?   It’s absolutely my No.1 choice and my dream school. I’m so so excited. I guess I don’t have to worry about other schools any more. I’ll graduate with my M.S. in Journalism.”

I think talking to you over Skype or phone and discussing my essays together really helped me a lot. I could understand why changes were needed and how to make them. I believe I learned a lot in this way. I would recommend you to others. Thanks so much for all your help. Please keep in touch.”  X. B. Columbia School of Journalism.  March 20, 2011.

“You helped me get what I had in my mind out onto the paper, in the way I wanted it. I’d definitely recommend you to any student who is struggling to write their essay.” S.C. – Duke University

” Debbie’s assistance on my law school personal statement was very useful.  She has excellent ideas on ways to improve any personal statement or to help an applicant get started on the essay. Debbie was a pleasure to work with and it is clear that she truly cares about helping her students.  Additionally, her knowledge of the entire application process makes her services even more useful to applicants.  I would recommend Debbie to any student applying to law school.” – Alex L

“You were extremely helpful and my essays wouldn’t have been nearly as good without our meetings (that’s an understatement).  You helped me write my own essays by extracting ideas from within me and guided me in their improvement, so your mission description holds true. ” – J.H.

“You helped me make my essay stand out, and give it a focus.” A.W. – James Madison University

“I liked how you taught to my style. Each time we worked we made a lot of progress on each essay. The free-write was helpful to get my ideas out there and warm up my ideas.” P.S. – University of Michigan

“You helped me find a topic that was meaningful for me and to other people as well. I had fun–I enjoyed the appointments.” M.A. – Miami University

To Whom It May Concern,

Writing has always been a difficult and painful process for me. When I decided to go to school for my M.B.A., the thought of developing personal essays during the application process almost prevented me from returning to school at all! Thankfully, I met Deb Merion. Deb helped me believe that what I had to say was valid and interesting. She also taught me that I could write it in a way which both inspired the reader’s confidence in me and gave an accurate insight into who I was and where I was going.

What surprised me most about working with Deb was her gift in understanding subjects which were unfamiliar to her. She asked wonderful, thought-provoking questions and had the ability to identify where my success factors were in those complex situations. She did not write for me; however, she was able to clear the muddy thought process which prevented me from communicating intelligently. She validated my thoughts, praised my progress, and worked diligently with me through approaching aggressive deadlines.

I liked working with Deb because she genuinely cared about my goals and adopted them as her own. When I told her I had been accepted to the University of Michigan’s Business School, it was as if we had been accepted, not just me. Now, when I write I feel more confident and capable concerning my skills and am able to believe more in myself. I highly recommend Deb to anyone who is looking for guidance in the writing process, for they can be assured that their final product will be regarded as a premium form of communication.

Sincerely,

G.B. CPA

Comments From Parents:

“I asked writing expert and essay coach, Debbie Merion, to bring her “Write Your Best College Application Essay” program to Dexter in August, 2011 to help my high school senior. My daughter, Kristen is an excellent student, but has struggled with writing. She heard about Debbie’s program  and knew it could give her a vital edge in the college application process−and she was not disappointed. Debbie’s coaching helped Kristen bring enthusiasm, focus and personality to her essay. The evolution in her writing style was remarkable. Through Debbie’s program, Kristen has mastered an important skill that she can tap again and again! Debbie brings out the unique story in each student, increasing their self-confidence and opening their eyes to new perspectives. The students in Kristen’s group had a great time and emerged more motivated, excited and prepared for the college application process.”– Diane Durance, Executive Director, Great Lakes Entrepreneur’s Quest

“You had a unique relationship and professional attitude which is what is needed to distill a high school student’s essay into something that really highlights that student. After speaking with an admissions counselor, I believe that his essays were the component in his application that made the difference.” J.S.

“Just wanted to say thank you for your essay coaching help this Fall.  Olivia heard from Michigan yesterday and has been accepted!  I have to believe that along with her grades, your help in preparing her to write a interesting essay made someone notice.” Kathy, December 2011.

“Last night we received heard good news from UM. I am grateful to you for your talents, your patience, your approach. Sign me up as a very satisfied customer.” Dr. Fred Hankin, December 2011.

“The most helpful thing for me is it took me out of the picture. I had a lot of trust that the essays were getting done; I had confidence in your ability to see the process through to completion. P.A.

Comments from Educators:

““Debbie connected with our students and teachers immediately. She inspired the students to write an essay that communicated their passion. After her lecture, Debbie facilitated a group of writing mentors who provided one-to-one feedback to seniors engaged in college essay writing. It was an awesome experience for both students and adults. I highly recommend Debbie.” –Joanne Hopper, Director of Education Services, St. Clare County RESA

Essay Coaching students have been accepted to:

  • American University
  • Brown University
  • Columbia University
  • Cornell University
  • Dennison University
  • Duke University
  • Emory University (Honors Program)
  • James Madison University
  • Harvard University
  • Indiana University
  • Lake Forest College
  • Michigan State University (Honors Program)
  • Northeastern University
  • Northwestern University
  • Oberlin College
  • University of Chicago
  • University of Georgia (Honors Program)
  • University of Michigan
  • University of Michigan (Honors Program)
  • Washington University in St. Louis
  • Wisconsin University
  • Wittenburg University–This student received a acceptance letter from the Director of Admissions, complimenting her on her essay and offering her a $60,000 academic scholarship.
  • Yale University